The Angel Cried Blood
Permanent ink on my mind,
Written as a memorial of,
Of an angel,
Angel crying blood
In the silent yet screaming night,
I got out to find my life.
When I saw a glittering figure,
Standing solely in the midst of crowd.
Here and there the people went,
But the angel stood like a frozen figurine.
Her face a little pearl of white,
Was wrapped in excruciating pain and torment.
Here ocean like eyes narrowed, glaring
At her dress, ghostly glowing.
Then,
Then two drops fell.
One form the heaven,
And one from her eyes.
Which I was jolted to see,
Was a scarlet droplet of blood.
The rain gained strength
And awashed the angels mystique beauty,
As her wings shattered,
Into thousands of wilted feathers.
And her knees hit the ground,
Still socking as she cried.
As I stood there dazed
I knew
That a drop form above,
Could never,
Lave away the pain within
When the angel cried blood.
By Iqra Imtiaz
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Comments
I also think that the ideas are kind of random, it looks like it's messy in your head, if you see what I mean
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We are all angels with only one wing and we can only fly by embracing each other.
and please, can you point out some mistakes you mentioned?
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Written as a memorial of,
Of an angel, (two times of)
Here ocean like eyes narrowed (her not here)
One form the heaven, (from not form)
That a drop form above, (from not form)
Hope it helps
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Dolphins at: [link]
We are all angels with only one wing and we can only fly by embracing each other.
the poem....
s-s-s-s-sooooo beautiful!!!
I really love it! And I totaly pictured everything in my head as I read this poem!
realy beautiful!!
and thank you soo much I-chan ;_____;
you're just TOOOOOO kind to mee!! ;_____;
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When you cease to dream, you cease to live!
thankyou again tursi-sama!! you've got a great eye for words!
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Poems in english at: [link]
Poèmes en français [link]
Dolphins at: [link]
We are all angels with only one wing and we can only fly by embracing each other.
im soo glad you like it
hehe, thankyou so much!
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Ukelele no gooood...
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